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周记怎么写(周记怎么写格式范文)


【真题再现】

假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。

写作要点:1. 做家务的理由;2. 做家务的过程;3. 你的感受。

注意:1. 短文词数不少于100;2. 开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

I am an 18-year-old middle school student. _______________________________

(2013年陕西卷书面表达)


【审题定调】

本题要求写一篇周记,记述周末帮助家人做家务的经历。周记的时态以过去时为主,人称以第一人称为主。

【谋篇布局】

周记没有标准的格式,只需把自己所看到的、听到的、想到的、经历的东西记下来,形成一篇文章即可。本篇写作任务需着重写出三个要点:做家务的理由、做家务的过程、个人感受。


【参考范文】

I'm an 18-year-old middle school student.I have been busy with my studies and seldom help my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I began to think about what to do to help.

Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.

At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.


【范文点评】

本文覆盖了所有写作要点,完全完成了试题规定的任务。文中出现的较复杂的语法结构有动词-ing形式短语Feeling quite sorry ...作原因状语、why not +动词原形、过去分词短语scattered in the rooms作定语、倒装结构Tired as I was等。本文使用的动词丰富且表意准确,如collect, wipe, sweep, mop等。

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